Wednesday, November 14, 2007

Take Away



Take away the wind
So I don't feel the breeze

Take away the doorways
So I don't feel the tease

Take away the clocks
So I don't feel the wait

Take away the smiles
So I don't feel the hate

Take away the clouds
So I don't feel the rain

Take away my heart
So I don't feel the pain

8 comments:

Bas~Melech said...

Now you're making me sad, Dreamer.

Is that really how you're feeling now?

((e-hug))

Anonymous said...

No way. The purpose of pain is so you can properly feel joy. If it weren't for downs we'd never know how great the ups were. Hang in there - things get better.

Scraps said...

I know how it feels to wish for anything to take the pain away, even if it means giving up on the joy as well. It burns inside of you, and if you had to cut your heart out to make it stop, you would.

It's a miserable feeling.

Your heart is so big, Dreamer. It is no wonder you can feel so much pain. But your heart can also feel delight, happiness, exhilaration, and so many other terrible and wonderful things. Is it worth giving up all of that, just to take away the pain?

All of it?

:(

(((HUGS)))

halfshared said...

:(

Yaffa said...

Dreamer, ure so down lately. ;(

And ure heart is way too big to take away.
Too many ppl inside.
Too many positive emotions in there.
Too many inspiring thoughts expressed from there.

I hope the pain leaves on its own- leaving e/t else intact.

Thinkin 'bout you...

the dreamer said...

BM - yeah, i was...
thanks.

bad4shidduchim - i know. just feeling things now.

scraps - no, it aint. but it sure feels like it is sometimes.

halfshared - :)

alien - cuz i haven't been talking to youuuuuuuuu.
:P
and yeah, you're one of the people in my heart.
:)

David_on_the_Lake said...

:-(

I really felt that one..

Scraps said...

Yes, I know it does. It hurts. :(

(((hugs))) <--cuz you can never have too many!